It is a good story. Personaly, I think that it will be better il it is longer, but have mistery and that is funny. I recomended you to reda this little and funny story. The new sentences: head off, dyed your hair and cut your throat for two bob.
I dont like this storie,to me it is boring.I thing that is easy to understand,it has a good structur, whereas, the istorie it coukd be funnier for us, the childrens and youngs.The storie i think that have a lot of things, and one ore two things are not very simple to understand, it must be more easy to us.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more. The new sence: -Head off -Dyed your hair.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more. The new sence: -Head off -Dyed your hair.
It is a good story. But, I think that it will be better il it is longer, but have mistery, but is funny too. I recomended you to reed this little, but funny story. The new sentences: - Head off - Dyed your hair
It's a very long story, and the estructure doesn't help learning better, do the story more difficult to understand. But with out this exeptions, it's a good story.
This is one of the strangest stories I have read. I dindn't understand it very well but I think it is funny because the boy is very cheeky. He tells lies and he is not worriest. The teacher was angry with him but he didn´t punnish him. New words/expressions for me -Bloke -Lad -Bad mood -Start to laugh my head off -Life is very unfair -I am in trouble again -Knockout -There is always a chance -I look him straight in the eye -Sensitive -Scared -Hardly -Guy -Stare at -Label -Shawl -Blond -Freak out -Saved I would recomend this story to people who have a lot os imagination and good mood.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more. The new sence: -Head off -Dyed your hair.
I like the story but my like the mistery storys and this is os mistery and is fun. For my is also long but is good story i'm like them. New words: -shawl -knockout -guy -unfair I'm recomended to the people that like the mistery.
I like the story but my like the mistery storys and this is os mistery and is fun. For my is also long but is good story i'm like them. New words: -shawl -knockout -guy -unfair I'm recomended to the people that like the mistery.
I like the story because she express her feelings, but is very long and in a lot of moments is boring. I don´t understand a lot of words: -straight -scared -carriage
I like the story because she express her feelings, but is very long and in a lot of moments is boring. I don´t understand a lot of words: -straight -scared -carriage
I didn't like the story because it's too long and it has got many vocabulary I don't understand, but it is a very nice story and I would recommend to read it.
I give 5 out of 5, because I think that is realy enjoyable and with some curiosities in different moments. So this do the story more interesting. I like a lot too, because it is speaking about a boy and a girl and it gives me a ghosipping moment.
It is a good story.I like it a lot. The reasons for enjoying a lot are,that the story is funny and misterius and that thill the end you dont now wat is happening,because each moment something new is hapeninig. The only thing i dont like a lot,is that of the "age rager" because it isen't real,but it is a good way of whiling the people and making the story funnier.The part that i like most is the end,because it's something you do not expect. So don't think twice and read it.
I liked the story because is misterious and funny at the same time. Is unreal but is a good story. I recomment to read it. New words: Head off Dyed your hair Cut your throat Indeed Grumpy
Iratxe_Pailazoak it's great story, i liked it a lot. It is easy to read and to understand. It's interesting because the narrator is writer in the firts person. But in moment is defficult to undertand but in small times. I recomended this story to people how likes to read easy.
It is a history easy and entertained to read. It tells the history of this one of mystery. It is long enough but it is very lovely and nice. I you the recomendeiting
Its rather difficult because its one preblem very serious and to understand the children is very difficult because have some word that i dont understand.
In my opinion, the story is easy to read, a little bit long, but very interesting and funny. It's great for all years people and I recommend it to you.
Personally, I think that it is a great story. It has mistery, it is entertaining and is a funny story, and also is very interesting. The story is long, but the vocabulary so easy to understand.
Nice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it. If you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best... They are not bad but... They are short, But acceptable.
In my opinion, the story is funny, entertaining and very interesting. It is also very original. Are some words that are more difficult but it easy to read.
I think that this story makes you laught a lot because whem you are reading you are nervous to thing what is going to happen.I love this tipes of stories.
I think that the story is very interesting and funny. I would make the story much longer to make it better.The ending is the best part of all, because it is the funniest part of all.
I think that this istory is funny because I laught when I was reading, but some words are difficult to understand. I don´t like to read, but this istory is not bad.
For my point of view, yhe story is so interesting because is of mistery and is a good story. The problem is that is a long story and they are parts that are boring. I don´t understand this words: Trouble Wire-rim Frightened
I don´t liked because in my opinion is boring, because is so long. Apart of this, is so difficult to underestand for example this words: Knockout Ghost Carriage Almighty
I didn't like the story, because it dosen't reflet the reality of the world. It is a fiction tale for children. The structure is very good, 'cause it has a begining, where the characters are descript, it also has the problem part and the ending. I think that there are some paragraphs that should be written in past, but they are in present. I recommend this tale to children around 11 years. Here are some words that I didn't understood: - Bloke, lad: Guy - Silly: Stupid - Staring: Look to someone with a fixed view - Mood: Emotional state - Jammed: Blocked
I like the story, but in my opinion is a littel bit long. Also, I think that it has a mistery part, and is a littel bit dificult to understand the meaning so it's interesting. I recommend this story.
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ReplyDeleteIt is a good story. Personaly, I think that it will be better il it is longer, but have mistery and that is funny. I recomended you to reda this little and funny story.
DeleteThe new sentences: head off, dyed your hair and cut your throat for two bob.
I dont like this storie,to me it is boring.I thing that is easy to understand,it has a good structur, whereas, the istorie it coukd be funnier for us, the childrens and youngs.The storie i think that have a lot of things, and one ore two things are not very simple to understand, it must be more easy to us.
DeleteI think that this story it's fine because it is very well explained and very well redacted
DeleteI liked, is a good story. It is funny, easy to read and to understand.
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ReplyDeleteI think that is a good story. is has mistery and that is entertaining. I recomended you to read this funny story.
ReplyDeleteThe new sentences: head off and dyed your hair.
I enjoyed, is a good history, with mistery but is too longer.
ReplyDeleteIts a good story, because is of mistery and its funny.I recomended you to read this beautiful story, I enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThe new sence: head off.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more.
ReplyDeleteThe new sence:
-Head off
-Dyed your hair.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more.
ReplyDeleteThe new sence:
-Head off
-Dyed your hair.
It is a good story. But, I think that it will be better il it is longer, but have mistery, but is funny too. I recomended you to reed this little, but funny story.
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- Head off
- Dyed your hair
I liked the story but i think that can finish later
ReplyDeleteI think that is a good story, is entertaining and with a touch of mystery
ReplyDeleteI liked the story but I think that it will be better il it is longer.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-Head off
-Dyed your hair
Ccut your throat
It is too long but is great,interesting and funny too
ReplyDeleteI think that is a good story but it can be shorter
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion is very long, and I think that it could be better if it was shorter, but otherwise is ok.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story but a little bit long.
ReplyDeleteI like this story, but is very long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion it is a little bit long but it is OK
ReplyDeleteI LIKE STORY BUT IS NOT INTERESTING
ReplyDeleteI don't like this story because is little bit long
ReplyDeleteI don´t like this story because is very long
ReplyDeleteIt is a nice story about mistery and very entertaining. For my pleasure it has the perfect sice.
ReplyDeleteThe new sence:
Head off
Dyeal your hear.
I think that this story is interesting but is very long
ReplyDeleteOn my opinion is very long but still interesting
ReplyDeletei didn't like because itt's too long, but the rest its ok
ReplyDeleteIt's great, original, but it's too long and a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteIt was very interesting and I've enjoyed it a lot.
ReplyDeleteI like it, but it is a little bit strange.I would like it more with a different ending.
ReplyDeleteI like the story is nice but i is a bit long. I would summarize a little bit.
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ReplyDeleteI like this story, it is a interesting story but it is a little bit long.
ReplyDeleteI think that this story is very interesting. The story is long and the vocabulary it is very easy.
ReplyDeleteIt's a very long story, and the estructure doesn't help learning better, do the story more difficult to understand. But with out this exeptions, it's a good story.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a good story, but you have to read concentrating, because it´s not easy to understand and it´s not short.
ReplyDeleteI like the story, but is not easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteThe story is long but is easy to understand. I recommend this story to the people who like the interesting stories.
ReplyDeleteFor my is boring, but the story really is interesting.
ReplyDeleteFor my is boring, but the story really is interesting.
ReplyDeleteIs a good story but could be shorter.
ReplyDeleteIs a good story but could be shorter.
ReplyDeleteIs a good story but could be shorter.
ReplyDeleteI didn´t enjoy this story because I think it is too boring
ReplyDeleteis good story but is a little long
ReplyDeleteis a good stroy and very interesant
ReplyDeleteIs a good story.
ReplyDeleteIt is too boring, it isn`t interesting!!
ReplyDeleteIt is a interesting story
ReplyDeleteIs a nice story
ReplyDeleteIs a nice story
ReplyDeleteIs the best history that I read in 5 years!
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ReplyDeleteIt is a interesting story
ReplyDeleteThis is one of the strangest stories I have read. I dindn't understand it very well but I think it is funny because the boy is very cheeky.
ReplyDeleteHe tells lies and he is not worriest. The teacher was angry with him but he didn´t punnish him.
New words/expressions for me
-Bloke
-Lad
-Bad mood
-Start to laugh my head off
-Life is very unfair
-I am in trouble again
-Knockout
-There is always a chance
-I look him straight in the eye
-Sensitive
-Scared
-Hardly
-Guy
-Stare at
-Label
-Shawl
-Blond
-Freak out
-Saved
I would recomend this story to people who have a lot os imagination and good mood.
It´s very nice story, because it`s funny and mistery, I liked too much and I recomendated you to read it .
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-Stare at
-Shawl
-Knockout
If you are borred it´s a grate story to read, and past a good time .I RECOMENDATE YOU.
Its a good and a interesant story about mistery, but for my pleasure is to short, maybe you can try to write a little bit more.
ReplyDeleteThe new sence:
-Head off
-Dyed your hair.
I like the story but my like the mistery storys and this is os mistery and is fun. For my is also long but is good story i'm like them.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-shawl
-knockout
-guy
-unfair
I'm recomended to the people that like the mistery.
I like the story but my like the mistery storys and this is os mistery and is fun. For my is also long but is good story i'm like them.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-shawl
-knockout
-guy
-unfair
I'm recomended to the people that like the mistery.
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ReplyDeleteI like the story because she express her feelings, but is very long and in a lot of moments is boring.
ReplyDeleteI don´t understand a lot of words:
-straight
-scared
-carriage
I like the story because she express her feelings, but is very long and in a lot of moments is boring.
ReplyDeleteI don´t understand a lot of words:
-straight
-scared
-carriage
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ReplyDeleteI like the story because tell us thinks that there are really interesting and true, I recomend to people that he has our age.
ReplyDelete-Lad
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ReplyDeleteearra hiiiii!!!!
ReplyDeleteits a bit boring.
ReplyDeleteis very boring and long
ReplyDeleteIt´s very long. Pfffffff...
ReplyDeleteI think that the story is amazing and very interesting
ReplyDeleteIt's a bit boring, it's very long
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ReplyDeleteIt's a good story,because it's funny,but it's also a little bit unreal.
ReplyDeleteIS SOO LONG XD
ReplyDeleteIt's a bit boring, it's very long
ReplyDeleteIt´s a sheet (poo)
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ReplyDeleteI didn't like the story because it's too long and it has got many vocabulary I don't understand, but it is a very nice story and I would recommend to read it.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed a lot becouse it speaks like a teenager person
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ReplyDeleteI give 5 out of 5, because I think that is realy enjoyable and with some curiosities in different moments. So this do the story more interesting. I like a lot too, because it is speaking about a boy and a girl and it gives me a ghosipping moment.
ReplyDeleteI like it because is about mistery and adventure. I would recommend to read it
ReplyDeleteit is too long,but it´s easy to read it
ReplyDeleteit is very long and borry you have to put more action
ReplyDeleteIt´s a interesting and different story I like it because you don´t know what is going to happen.I don´t hope that ending.
ReplyDeleteIt´s a interesting and different story I like it because you don´t know what is going to happen.I don´t hope that ending.
ReplyDeleteI like the story because is very mysterious, but it makes me a little bit difficult to read.
ReplyDeleteI like the story because is very mysterious, but it makes me a little bit difficult to read.
ReplyDeleteIt's great, but I don't understand some words. It is interesting.
ReplyDeleteIs very good
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this story, it is great and it is very easy to undestand.
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Almighty
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The story is very good, I enjoyed it a lot, because I liked mysterious stories.
ReplyDeleteNew words for me:
Dye
Jammed
Almighty
It is a good story.I like it a lot. The reasons for enjoying a lot are,that the story is funny and misterius and that thill the end you dont now wat is happening,because each moment something new is hapeninig. The only thing i dont like a lot,is that of the "age rager" because it isen't real,but it is a good way of whiling the people and making the story funnier.The part that i like most is the end,because it's something you do not expect. So don't think twice and read it.
ReplyDeleteThe words that were new for me were:- the bloke.
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I like this story. When I start reading I didn't like but I continiu and I liked.
ReplyDeleteWords:
-outside
-twiddles
-indeed
I liked the story because is misterious and funny at the same time. Is unreal but is a good story. I recomment to read it.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
Head off
Dyed your hair
Cut your throat
Indeed
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ReplyDeleteI like this story,because in my opinion it was funni and interesant.Also because is easy to read and no too long
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the story, because in my opnion is very funny and interesting, and is easy to read.
ReplyDeleteNew words:
-Punished.
-Unfair.
-Dyed.
It's great.
ReplyDeleteIs not so long and boring so I like this stoy. It is quite funny also.
ReplyDeleteThe new vocabulary:
- Carriage
- Lad
- Dyed
Iratxe_Pailazoak it's great story, i liked it a lot. It is easy to read and to understand. It's interesting because the narrator is writer in the firts person. But in moment is defficult to undertand but in small times. I recomended this story to people how likes to read easy.
ReplyDeleteIt is a history easy and entertained to read. It tells the history of this one of mystery. It is long enough but it is very lovely and nice. I you the recomendeiting
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ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story is good written. But it´s a bit long and boring.
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In my opinion this story is good written. But it´s a bit long and boring.
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In my opinion this story is good written. But it´s very long and boring. It's very hard going. Maddi Ugalde.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story it's great. But it's a bit long.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story it's great. But it's a bit long.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story its easy. Its special story and very interesting!!! But itś a bit long
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story its easy. Its special story and very interesting!!! But itś a bit long
ReplyDeleteIts rather difficult because its one preblem very serious and to understand the children is very difficult because have some word that i dont understand.
ReplyDeleteWords:
-finds
-himself
-trouble
Read it. I enjoy it a lot, because is funny and mysterious at the same time.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, the story is easy to read, a little bit long, but very interesting and funny. It's great for all years people and I recommend it to you.
ReplyDeletePersonally, I think that it is a great story. It has mistery, it is entertaining and is a funny story, and also is very interesting. The story is long, but the vocabulary so easy to understand.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion it was so enjoyable, because the genre of the story was horror and I like it
ReplyDeleteIt's a good story,but personaly I think that it is too long. However, is very interesting and it makes me laught.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a good story. I like it. Was interesting and different, also funny but at the same time I felt strange while I was reading.
ReplyDeleteI find it a very funny story, specially the final where (spoiler) the girl's boyfriend is wearing a pink bow tie. (David Capel Martos)
ReplyDeleteI think the story is good but it could be longer
ReplyDeleteIs very beautiful and i liked
ReplyDeletei don't like too much this story because is too long.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story. I think that it will be better il it is longer, but have mistery and that is funny.
ReplyDeleteNice story dear writer :D but i think you write too many stories and u may choose one and try to improve it.
ReplyDeleteIf you like to write storyes u may spend a lot of time writing and doing better stories if u want to be the best...
They are not bad but...
They are short,
But acceptable.
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DeleteThe story is not bad, but it doesen't have sense with the title. I give him 3 stars
ReplyDeleteI don´t like this book because is very long story and he has parts of mistery and funny
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DeleteI don't like too much this story because is a bit strange and the vocabulary is sometimes difficult.
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DeleteI think the history is good, but is so long. I like the history but in some parts is so boring, and in other parts is so funny.
ReplyDeleteI give him 3 stars.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, the story is funny, entertaining and very interesting. It is also very original. Are some words that are more difficult but it easy to read.
ReplyDeleteajajaaja lol xd
ReplyDeleteI think that is a funny,interesting and different story.But there are some words that i don't understand.
ReplyDeleteI think that this story makes you laught a lot because whem you are reading you are nervous to thing what is going to happen.I love this tipes of stories.
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the story, because is funny and mysterious, but the history was very long and I didn't like that.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story. It has mistery, it is entertaining and is funny, and also is very interesting. But in moment is defficult to undertand.
ReplyDeleteI think that the story is very interesting and funny. I would make the story much longer to make it better.The ending is the best part of all, because it is the funniest part of all.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion this story, it is between boring and funny. I think that is more funny than boring, but it´s sow long, but I'm recommend you.
ReplyDeleteI think that this istory is funny because I laught when I was reading, but some words are difficult to understand. I don´t like to read, but this istory is not bad.
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ReplyDeleteI don't like it. In my opinion is so boring, and I think it's more for younger students that for students like us.
ReplyDeleteFor my point of view, yhe story is so interesting because is of mistery and is a good story. The problem is that is a long story and they are parts that are boring.
ReplyDeleteI don´t understand this words:
Trouble
Wire-rim
Frightened
I don´t liked because in my opinion is boring, because is so long.
ReplyDeleteApart of this, is so difficult to underestand for example this words:
Knockout
Ghost
Carriage
Almighty
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ReplyDeleteI didn't like the story, because it dosen't reflet the reality of the world. It is a fiction tale for children. The structure is very good, 'cause it has a begining, where the characters are descript, it also has the problem part and the ending. I think that there are some paragraphs that should be written in past, but they are in present.
ReplyDeleteI recommend this tale to children around 11 years.
Here are some words that I didn't understood:
- Bloke, lad: Guy
- Silly: Stupid
- Staring: Look to someone with a fixed view
- Mood: Emotional state
- Jammed: Blocked
Is a Good story but it is bery long
ReplyDeleteI like it
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ReplyDeleteI liked becouse is ease to read and is not bore
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DeleteI don't like becouse the history is very long, but forgetting us the history is good.
ReplyDeleteIt's a good and funny history , I liked but is very long
ReplyDeleteIt's a good storie , but it is a bit long and boring.
ReplyDeleteI think that the storie is a little bit boring. But i liked.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good story but it is very long and boring.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, the story is good, but I think that is quite long.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion,is a exciting story, but is a long story and I bore reading.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the story is quite good, but I think that is too long and I bore a little bit
ReplyDeleteI like the storie because it has mistery and is so interesting.But I think that is too long.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion the storie is interesting, but a little bit long. If you like to read long stories, you must read it.
ReplyDeleteIt's a very nice story
ReplyDeletebut it cost me a lot to understand the histotia
I didn't enjoyed this story, because is very long and very boring.I didn't recommended.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, it's a bit boring, because is a very long story.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story,It's easy to read but is so long.
ReplyDeleteI think that the story is funny, and interest, but is so long.
ReplyDeleteI like the story but I don't understod old the words.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story,It`s so interesant but is bery long
ReplyDeleteI like the story, It's great bat but is long
ReplyDeleteI like the story and is very interesting but is long
ReplyDeleteI like, this story becouse is very funny and diferent.
ReplyDeleteI like this story a lot, because it's funny and a little mysterious. But apart from that in my opinion it is a bit long and people can get bored.
ReplyDeleteI recommend you read the book, it's worth it!
In my opinion, the story is very interesting, but it's too long to read
ReplyDeleteI like this story, because is interesting and funny, But i think that is very long.
ReplyDeleteI dont like the story becouse is very long
ReplyDeleteI like the story because is very interesting and is very easy to read
ReplyDeleteFor me the story esay to read it but understud the story.
ReplyDeleteI like the story, because is funny and interesting, but is very long.
ReplyDeletei liked the story,is funny and interesting ,is easy to read.
ReplyDeleteI like the story because, I think it is easy to understund but also it is boring.
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ReplyDeleteI hate the book, it's boring and absurd.
DeleteJust remembering how bad it is, makes me want to vomit!
Please don't read it.
I like the story, but in my opinion is a littel bit long. Also, I think that it has a mistery part, and is a littel bit dificult to understand the meaning so it's interesting.
ReplyDeleteI recommend this story.
I like the story because is very funny and i like the funny storyes, but is little bit long. You have to read with time.
ReplyDeleteI like the story, but is very long to read.
ReplyDeleteI like this story because is funny but is a littel bit long and dificult to understand.
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